Finland is all alone, and he wants to see Sweden again, but he find himself in Soviet Russia. only one friend of him he can trust in.
Main Pairings: EstoniaxFinland, SwedenxFinand
EDIT: SOON IN ENGLISH.
(and if there is anyone who wanna help me, can translate it to german from english)
ich will dich sehen
Erstellt: 11.08.2010
Letzte Änderung: 11.08.2010
Letzte Änderung: 11.08.2010
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3379 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
3379 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Hetalia - Axis Powers
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Látni akarlak | E: 11.08.2010 U: 11.08.2010 |
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Finnland - Finnország
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Estland - Észtország
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Russland - Oroszország
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Litauen und Lettland - Litvánia és Lettország
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Schweden - Svédország
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (1)
well, that was kinda sweet, sad and touching and really sweet ;)
(my hungarian sucks really bad, so i write you a review in english so you can at least understand something of what i want to say ^^'')
if this fic had been in german, i tell you honestly, i wouldn't have read it, because the nordic-characters of hetalia are not well known to me...but when i saw that this was actually in hungarian i wanted to give my bad language-skills a try...and i also know that the main reason you don't have any reviews on your fic is that simply most of the people here just don't understand hungarian xD' so i thought i might give it a try and appreciate someone's hard work ^-^
this was rly dramatic and i was suffering with finland the whole way trough this fic, i liked how you often repeated this phrase 'i wanna see you'... rly good way of showing finland's longing for sveden.
i also liked these little hints of russia/finland and estonia/finland,they made everything a little bit more interesting...
my favourite part is of course the ending (yeah, happy ending <3) where they finally found together again and lie together in that bed...rly touching ;_;
i can't rly give you a constructive critic on your writing-style or grammar or something like that, because, as i have mentioned before, i'm hungarian but i speak it so unfrequently and never rly learned how to write in hungarian that i wouldn't notice any mistakes ^^''
so all i can say, very well done, for me it is like a dramatic-angsty-romatic-fic should be and i'm looking forward to read more from you ^^
~Sunday
(my hungarian sucks really bad, so i write you a review in english so you can at least understand something of what i want to say ^^'')
if this fic had been in german, i tell you honestly, i wouldn't have read it, because the nordic-characters of hetalia are not well known to me...but when i saw that this was actually in hungarian i wanted to give my bad language-skills a try...and i also know that the main reason you don't have any reviews on your fic is that simply most of the people here just don't understand hungarian xD' so i thought i might give it a try and appreciate someone's hard work ^-^
this was rly dramatic and i was suffering with finland the whole way trough this fic, i liked how you often repeated this phrase 'i wanna see you'... rly good way of showing finland's longing for sveden.
i also liked these little hints of russia/finland and estonia/finland,they made everything a little bit more interesting...
my favourite part is of course the ending (yeah, happy ending <3) where they finally found together again and lie together in that bed...rly touching ;_;
i can't rly give you a constructive critic on your writing-style or grammar or something like that, because, as i have mentioned before, i'm hungarian but i speak it so unfrequently and never rly learned how to write in hungarian that i wouldn't notice any mistakes ^^''
so all i can say, very well done, for me it is like a dramatic-angsty-romatic-fic should be and i'm looking forward to read more from you ^^
~Sunday
