Kairaishi: Meister der Marionetten

wooow *-*
echt hammer...
tolle idee für einen doji und suuuper gezeichnet^^
echt...
respekt^^

I've meant questiOn XD
and i'ved misst an H (witH)
And I forgott the "?" two times but I hope you know where they should stand ^^°
if not I'll correct it:"Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now ?" ) or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now ? ")
I really hope that you can understand my bad english ^^°

I've got a questin, what do you want to say wit "wie gehen wir jetzt weiter" do you mean it like how will we walk on? because that's what it sounds like.
if you want to say : "How will we go on now" or "what will we do now"
I think it would sound better to say something like: "Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now") or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now")
I think tose both would fit well ^^

hi ^^
I was really surprised about your good german ^^
till now I've just found one mistake
you've written "Diese Symbiose werde tötlich für dich sein!"
but the sentence has to be "Diese Symbiose wird tötlich für dich sein!"
so the mistake is "werde"
but i think it's no big mistake ^^
so be proud of your good german,because I suppose that it's hard to learn our language ^^

(I hope you can understand my bad english ^^°)

It's an grat Doujinshi *____*
*gg*
I liked it, too.

Rahh! >.<
Again I managed to close the site by accident - containing the comment I was writing without copiing it before.
T.T
I haven't enough time now to write it again. You'll have two wait.
Sorry for that. ^.~

great!!!
i like your Dojinshi^^
you have a good style of drawing
and the story is fantastic XD

What? Why it is so short? It is soooooooo good, I like it verry mutch but to short.

it was so... beautiful! really! i enjoyed reading.
yeah, just luv it!!!!!!!! :D

ehm also ganz spitze und das du nict so ut deusth kannst merkt man nicht xD
nur bei seite 10 das letzte panel heist ::tödlich FÜR DICH :::
weil die symtome nicht tödlich handln können denk ich ......
also das es durch :zu dir: personifiziert wird ...
egal xD jedenfalss sagt man da :für dich:
sonsttt alles <3