In the dark of the night, not even kings are safe from nightmares. And sometimes kings just have do be brothers.
A little story for two little boys. Love you.
Disclaimer: Nothing of this is mine beside the plot. It all belongs to C.S. Lewis.
The Night is midnight Blue
Erstellt: 30.10.2006
Letzte Änderung: 31.10.2006
Letzte Änderung: 31.10.2006
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Englisch
1605 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
1605 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Die Chroniken von Narnia
Hauptcharaktere: Peter Pevensie, Edmund Pevensie
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 30.10.2006 U: 31.10.2006 |
Kommentare (4) 1606 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2008-08-23T22:08:55+00:00
24.08.2008 00:08
Hey.
I have to say: Thank you!!! You're the only one who has written
a ff about "The Chronicles of Narnia". Even in German (ok. at this point I have to admit, that I am from Germany^^)there isn't one.
And your ff is so good, that I can't even find the right words, wheter in englich or in german. You're a very good writer.
....so cute....so cute....so cute....XD ^^
I hope that's not your last fanfic. ;)
<3 (I hope there aren't too many mistakes in my comment^^but I wanted to write in engl.^^)
I have to say: Thank you!!! You're the only one who has written
a ff about "The Chronicles of Narnia". Even in German (ok. at this point I have to admit, that I am from Germany^^)there isn't one.
And your ff is so good, that I can't even find the right words, wheter in englich or in german. You're a very good writer.
....so cute....so cute....so cute....XD ^^
I hope that's not your last fanfic. ;)
<3 (I hope there aren't too many mistakes in my comment^^but I wanted to write in engl.^^)
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Von: abgemeldet
2008-08-13T12:31:27+00:00
13.08.2008 14:31
I can´t find the right word to describe this fanfiction properly...
may touching or moving could be right...
I simply LOVE it!
I´ve never read a fanfiction about Narnia before, it´s my first one and I have to say it will be the best >.<
You did very well on it, definitely cause I could FEEL what Peter felt and how scared Ed was- you have the talent to eveoke feelings out of the nowwhere; amazing!
I especially like storys about brothers, it have its own fascination may that´s why I love Dean& Sam ^^
This special bound between this two brothers, you expressed it masterly!!
I had to smile when I came across the part where Peter sleeps next to Ed and also kisses him... awwww soo cute!!!
Keep on!!
may touching or moving could be right...
I simply LOVE it!
I´ve never read a fanfiction about Narnia before, it´s my first one and I have to say it will be the best >.<
You did very well on it, definitely cause I could FEEL what Peter felt and how scared Ed was- you have the talent to eveoke feelings out of the nowwhere; amazing!
I especially like storys about brothers, it have its own fascination may that´s why I love Dean& Sam ^^
This special bound between this two brothers, you expressed it masterly!!
I had to smile when I came across the part where Peter sleeps next to Ed and also kisses him... awwww soo cute!!!
Keep on!!
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Von: abgemeldet
2008-08-04T10:51:19+00:00
04.08.2008 12:51
Hi,
I love your fanfic. It's great, no it's not great it's wonderful! My english is not tat good so I hope you understand what I'm writing.
Everything in this fanfic isamazing. You descirbe everything very clear, the feelings, the situation, the characters. Everything! I love your style.
Yeah please write another fanfic about them okay? It's so great!
I love your fanfic. It's great, no it's not great it's wonderful! My english is not tat good so I hope you understand what I'm writing.
Everything in this fanfic isamazing. You descirbe everything very clear, the feelings, the situation, the characters. Everything! I love your style.
Yeah please write another fanfic about them okay? It's so great!
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Well, why aren't there any comments for this great fanfic yet?
It's confusing. The story is so wonderful~
I like fanfics about Peter and Edmund and I am sad that this is the only one here at animexx.de
I hope there will be more. And at least I hope you'll write a second fic about these two. Onegai~
It's confusing. The story is so wonderful~
I like fanfics about Peter and Edmund and I am sad that this is the only one here at animexx.de
I hope there will be more. And at least I hope you'll write a second fic about these two. Onegai~
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