The Phantom of the Digiworld

*O*
wow ich finde deine ff einfach hammercool
einfach wahnsinn wie toll du das phantom der oper in die digiwelt geschafft hast
*den hut zeih vor dieser idee*
auch das die ff in englisch ist finde ich mal was neues, es gibt nicht viele die in englisch schreiben
ich finde das du sehr sicher im englischen bist und auch sehr abwechslungsreich geschrieben hast
*____*
lange nicht mehr so eine coole ff gelesen ^^
*sofort auf die favoliste pack*

Well, the story goes on .. and sure, there is no regret about reading it ;)
Although I do know about the plot of phantom of the opera, I am unsure about differences you`ll make or even about the solution.
Sure, they are some little details changed, but it works. It only could be helpful if there would be more small parts of text, it`s hard to read all in one part. So it`s hard to guess whom is speaking, if you have to wait until the sentence after direct speech.
But I like the story and your way of describing scenery or events.

Greetz again.

Well, do i have to comment in english, or...? May you tell me, I refuse german at first although I am not british.
As a matter of fact, you have a very vivid style to write, I really enjoyed your little welcome *giggles*, and surely, I am curious about the way you`ll make that crossover at last. However it sounds pretty, doesn`t it? Nice way to introduce by imagening sitting in front of some theatre ..
And compliment to your beta reader, she did a great a job. Nevertheless, would it be possible to separate the space between introduction and beginning of the scene with some more lines? Otherwise it`s hard to tell what belongs to your explanation and the story itself.

Greetz