Birthday or Festival?
Little B-Day Fic I wrote for Naruto, NaruSaku and once mentioned kinda InoCho
Autor: MoD366 Weitere Fanfics des Autors
Erstellt: 15.10.2007
Letzte Änderung: 15.10.2007
Letzte Änderung: 15.10.2007
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1452 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
1452 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Hauptcharaktere: Sakura Haruno, Naruto Uzumaki
One day before Naruto's B-Day Ino hints that there is some important thing going on 'tomorrow', but Sakura doesn't know what she means. She does the worst thing possible: ask Naruto what is so special about 'tomorrow'.
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 15.10.2007 U: 15.10.2007 |
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Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (3)
Von: abgemeldet
08.02.2009 10:39
Well, just like Knuddelfan and Reborn already told you,
I also think it was a good Fanfic, but it realy went a bit
to, hm, fast. But I stil think you`re a good writer, it`s
just... I think that you shouldn`t have put the Plot in an
One-Shot. I think two ore three chapters would have
been better.
Greetings,
James95
I also think it was a good Fanfic, but it realy went a bit
to, hm, fast. But I stil think you`re a good writer, it`s
just... I think that you shouldn`t have put the Plot in an
One-Shot. I think two ore three chapters would have
been better.
Greetings,
James95
Oh ...my English is very bad but I want to write ?something?
F*** In my oppinion it was good T-T ( I understand what you said but I cant speak English T_T)
I mean it too, it was a little to fast
( ach F*** alles was ich sagen will ist: Es hat mir gut gefallen es ging nur ein bisschen arg schnell)
F*** In my oppinion it was good T-T ( I understand what you said but I cant speak English T_T)
I mean it too, it was a little to fast
( ach F*** alles was ich sagen will ist: Es hat mir gut gefallen es ging nur ein bisschen arg schnell)
Well... Good Fanfic but i think that everything has gone too fast so nexttime give them both more time k?
so
Have Fun
MFG
Reborn @ i don't what MFG means in English. ...Damm!
so
Have Fun
MFG
Reborn @ i don't what MFG means in English. ...Damm!
