Short Summer

I know, I said I would read it tomorrow, but somehow… yeah, I read it today already X’D~ and I have to say, the dictionary was needed only one time :D it was easily to understand ^^
@ Story: I like the Story :D, but I thought the ‘thing’ between Barry and Sam would gonna work, mainly after Barry invited Sam and sou, but the thingy with Mike was a nice ending though ^-^ I liked it a lot ;)
To go about grammar, sentence structure and so on I can’t really help, because of my bad English *drop* but one mistake I’ve noticed, feel free to correct me but I always thought it’s called “highs cool student” and not “highscooler”? It would be new to me ^^’
Err..yeah… anything else? Ya, the scene with Sam and Barry on the veranda XD I was smoking that time and the atmosphere, it fitted completely, it was great! *laugh*
Ou! Some more thing is, I prefer the phrase; In my _entire_ life instead of In my whole life, it’s sounds way better …I think ^^’
So.. that’s it… it was a great story ^-^ and it was a pleasure to read it! Ou and thank you, that you have brought me to read something in English XD good job Sugi :D
So, keep it up!

gosha

p.s.: sorry for my bad english again, I hope you can understand, what I have written *drop*

Soooo...
Hab doch länger als eine halbe Stunde gebraucht xD'
Ich fands schön geschrieben x3 Multitalent! ;D
Aufjedenfall konnt ichs mit meinen Englisch Kenntnissen gut verstehen, des is doch schonmal was =D
Story fand ich toll!
Nur ich hätt mir gewünscht, dass das mit Sam und Barry doch noch was geworden wäre.. Naja, was solls, so ein 'exotischer Asiate' ist doch auch was feines ;D

lg, deine treue Anhängerin Atsu xP <3