Friendship

Themenbezogen - in english
As the person before me already mentioned, the setences could have been a little more complex, but this was meant to show up the thoughts of a child, right? So who cares...
(I mean, if a four-year-old child would think linke Goethe write, it would honestly scare me XD)
I really apprecciated that this FF was different - beside the fact it's english ;-)
One usually gets to read this love-stuff, so I adored it being foreign.^^
All in all:Good job, dude!

So, something in english..
I guess your english lessons in school were to easy for you... like you always told me.. xD
Its a great text!
Your sentences are shorter than I would write them, but we know this little problem with ending sentences, don't we?
ily

Also mein erster Schock, dass es auf englisch war, ist zum glück schnell verflogen XD
immerhin hab ich alles verstanden
*stolz desu*

ich fands sehr niedlich beschrieben, wie david nicht zum kiga wollte
*.*
da möcht man den doch glatt knuffeln xD

kritikpunkte hmm...
vllt wars zu kurz? xD
das einzige, wo ich jetzt meckern würde, wär vllt, dass du die sätze vllt hättest komplexer schreiben können xD
waren ja relativ einfache sätze...wobei das wiederhin gut fürs verstänbdnis war....
oder es war so beabsichtigt ^^

anyways: well-done and you did a great job =)