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Blind.

"This is farewell, Ichigo..."

She is fading...

"Don't make such a sad face."

Becoming less and less.

"…Tell everyone I give them my best."

Don't tell them 'I see you.' I won't.

"Bye, Rukia."

Her image already nothing more than a memory...

"Thank you."

...just like the blue sky.
 

She's gone forever.
 

Seeing ghosts – it was part of my life.

It's like I'm blind now. Blinded by the sun shining right through the bodies of those I was destined to see.
 

Can't see, can't touch-
 

"ARGH! RUKIA, YOU LITTLE..."
 

...I forgot. She can still very much see and touch me.



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Von:  Hyoura
2010-10-27T20:28:52+00:00 27.10.2010 22:28
Oh my god, so, one little hommage at the (not anymore) latest chapter. And because of genek, who has written her review in english, i will do so too (because i am stupid and can't really speak english and.... ah, forget it)
So, your little plot is really nice (although i found it sometimes really difficult, to have some kind of plot in drabbles). genek is right, it's very typical for bleach, to make something like that, and it helps to give some hope to me, for poor ichigo T_T. all in all, genek is right (that means, there isn't much left for me to say).
Only, i wanted to say that this description of yours, where you write how rukia is fading (i found your choice of those words really good) is, although you write not much words, so well done, i don't know any words to depict it. And then there is the big difference in the style, where Ichigo speaks. =D At this moment, i must laughed, it was so funny!
So, i hope you can understand my english =D
And i hope, you will bless us with some of those works of you soon
I see forward to it!
Hyoura
Von:  genek
2010-10-26T16:40:16+00:00 26.10.2010 18:40
Aaah, Farewell Swords. I see. (And since you did an English drabble I'll just do the review in English too, so that <s>I can show off my English skillz</s> it fits together, see?)
I'm still not sure whether liked that particular chapter or not, but most certainly I liked what you made out of it with that drabble. The very melancholic beginnig just twists with Rukia's acitons which are absolutely in character. And hey, you also connect it to the very first chapter with Ichigo kicking Rukia :D And that comic relief wtf-scene would totally fit Kubo's sense of humour (or whatever you may call that). I just wish something of that sort would happen this chapter... pretty please?
So you see, I liked the drabble. And of course the fact that you seem to have found inspiration again. Keep it up :D


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