the sorrows of young luce
Erstellt: 27.12.2009
Letzte Änderung: 28.12.2009
Letzte Änderung: 28.12.2009
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Englisch
898 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
898 Wörter, 2 Kapitel
Genre: Girls Love
Unterthemen: Imagine Me & You
The supermarket-scene from Luce's point of view. I don't own anything. Oh, and please be lenient toward me if I made horrible linguistic mistakes, I'm german >.<
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 27.12.2009 U: 28.12.2009 |
Kommentare (1 ) 898 Wörter |
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| Kapitel 1 supermarket | E: 27.12.2009 U: 27.12.2009 |
Kommentare (1) 697 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Kapitel 2 don't | E: 28.12.2009 U: 28.12.2009 |
Kommentare (0) 189 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (1)
Von: abgemeldet
14.04.2010 19:49
Haaa!! I love this scene. And I love Edie.
Well, I haven't found any mistakes and it's nice to see the whole scene out of Luce's perspective.
Go on like that.
By the way, I'm really glad you didn't write in german 'cause the translation is just horrible.
Well, I haven't found any mistakes and it's nice to see the whole scene out of Luce's perspective.
Go on like that.
By the way, I'm really glad you didn't write in german 'cause the translation is just horrible.
