Twisted
Erstellt: 02.08.2014
Letzte Änderung: 12.11.2014
Letzte Änderung: 12.11.2014
pausiert
Englisch
2143 Wörter, 4 Kapitel
2143 Wörter, 4 Kapitel
Thema: the GazettE
As I prefer writing English, why not a fanfiction?
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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| ~komplette Fanfic~ | V: 02.08.2014 U: 12.11.2014 |
Kommentare (4 ) 2143 Wörter |
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| Kapitel 1 Crazy Fuck | E: 03.08.2014 U: 03.08.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 528 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Kapitel 2 Madman | E: 03.08.2014 U: 03.08.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 382 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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| Kapitel 3 Dirty Statisfaction | E: 02.09.2014 U: 02.09.2014 |
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| Kapitel 4 Thunderstorm | E: 12.11.2014 U: 12.11.2014 |
Kommentare (0) 432 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Kommentare zu dieser Fanfic (4)
Von: abgemeldet
07.12.2014 19:10
Finally I managed to read the last two chapters~ I said to myself "read it as a reward" because I'm gonna write three exams next week but I couldn't resist reading it earlier^^
Somehow I like how it turned out. It's kinda more realistic and also cute how Uruha had to stop their little adventure. Aoi is cute as well as he cares for Uruha even though he's drunk, too.
"Uruha giggled drunkenly, crawling closer to Aoi and snuggling into his embrace." It's rather sweet that those two do not only make love together (to describe it children-friendly xD) but also share their warmth :) And somehow I can understand Aoi's words of admiring Uruha although I assume that a live like Uruha's isn't always easy as well. They are really cute together and I'm looking forward to read how the story continues :)
(I'm sorry, I feel like my English is a complete mess after learning for the French exam T_T)
Somehow I like how it turned out. It's kinda more realistic and also cute how Uruha had to stop their little adventure. Aoi is cute as well as he cares for Uruha even though he's drunk, too.
"Uruha giggled drunkenly, crawling closer to Aoi and snuggling into his embrace." It's rather sweet that those two do not only make love together (to describe it children-friendly xD) but also share their warmth :) And somehow I can understand Aoi's words of admiring Uruha although I assume that a live like Uruha's isn't always easy as well. They are really cute together and I'm looking forward to read how the story continues :)
(I'm sorry, I feel like my English is a complete mess after learning for the French exam T_T)
Your English is fine, don't worry about it ;)
Fucking is great and fun, but you can't build a realationship just on sweet love making, can you? ( I'm not as clean as you are in my word choice :D )
If you don't embrace someone drunk out of his mind and still manage to love him, it's just a waste of time... :)
I think the lifes of both of them aren't easy. They do have their fleas and weak points but only because they are how they are, they do fit so perfectly :)
Fucking is great and fun, but you can't build a realationship just on sweet love making, can you? ( I'm not as clean as you are in my word choice :D )
If you don't embrace someone drunk out of his mind and still manage to love him, it's just a waste of time... :)
I think the lifes of both of them aren't easy. They do have their fleas and weak points but only because they are how they are, they do fit so perfectly :)
Von: abgemeldet
02.09.2014 20:00
I'm in love~ I enjoyed reading every single word out loud in my head. Like always I could feel the heat between those two and even if my window is open and I should have been freezing I didn't feel the cold at all :D My whole body was busy with making my own porn in my head ^~^
But I feel sorry for Ruki- who's gonna clean his room after the little tryst? I wouldn't like to sleep in a bed covered with someone else's body fluid xD'
I faltered right after the first sentence- your choice of words is so much harder in English than in German :D But I kinda prefer it. I don't think it's possible to write a story with so much erotic tension in German. It just sounds way better in English ^~^
But I feel sorry for Ruki- who's gonna clean his room after the little tryst? I wouldn't like to sleep in a bed covered with someone else's body fluid xD'
I faltered right after the first sentence- your choice of words is so much harder in English than in German :D But I kinda prefer it. I don't think it's possible to write a story with so much erotic tension in German. It just sounds way better in English ^~^
My words, dear :D I don't like using harsh language in German as it just doesn't sound right to me, but in English I feel like I'm more free in my word choice and using this sort of language adds to the heat and dirtiness of it all rather than destroying the mood as it would in German :)
Ah and concerning Ruki....well....probably he's gonne burn his sheets right away >D
This is so hot, I seriously can't wait for more!
I really love your way of writing, and how you're portraying them as mature men. Usually, the stories here aren't really my style, so I can't thank you enough for sharing this! Looking forward to reading more and more and mooore of this!
I really love your way of writing, and how you're portraying them as mature men. Usually, the stories here aren't really my style, so I can't thank you enough for sharing this! Looking forward to reading more and more and mooore of this!
Thanks!
They actually are mature man, aren't they? So I totally agree with you not liking them being anything else. Though I do sometimes like to portrait them as young and boish, I never enjoyed them being cute...as..no guy wants to be cute, doesn't he?
They actually are mature man, aren't they? So I totally agree with you not liking them being anything else. Though I do sometimes like to portrait them as young and boish, I never enjoyed them being cute...as..no guy wants to be cute, doesn't he?
Von: abgemeldet
03.08.2014 18:39
Oh how I love it!~ ^-^
You know I really love your way of writing but in English it's even better! ^_^
I can feel the intensity between those two by only reading. Uruha absolutely knows what he has to do to drive Aoi crazy~ But Aoi is completely under his spell, Uruha doesn't have to do a lot except smiling and moving his hips. I'm curious where they'll end the night, if it'll be only the restroom of the disco or if they'll manage to find a bed. But they're almost having sex on the dance floor- I don't think they can wait until they're home :D
I'm looking forward to the next chapters :3
You know I really love your way of writing but in English it's even better! ^_^
I can feel the intensity between those two by only reading. Uruha absolutely knows what he has to do to drive Aoi crazy~ But Aoi is completely under his spell, Uruha doesn't have to do a lot except smiling and moving his hips. I'm curious where they'll end the night, if it'll be only the restroom of the disco or if they'll manage to find a bed. But they're almost having sex on the dance floor- I don't think they can wait until they're home :D
I'm looking forward to the next chapters :3
I think a back door alley would also be fine for those two :D
Uruha is feeling hot'n bothered and he's definitely up for some fun, but I think despite all sex I'm up for some twisted romance this time :3
Uruha is feeling hot'n bothered and he's definitely up for some fun, but I think despite all sex I'm up for some twisted romance this time :3
