The Lonely Seesaw

It was really nice and a lots of more than this!
The story was... fanastic, quiet awesome and more than I can stand with my sensitive herat that beats vor Yama and Tai *laugh*
Really nice you style of writing and I hope that I can read more from you in the future.

At least this is my favorite part ins your story, because of the fact that it shows all the feelings the both boys had:

>>It's as cold as ice and you flinch a bit as my warmth radiates towards you. Funny... usually it's the other way round.

"Yama... wha..."

For the second time this day I manage to startle someone with a kiss. But this one I want. I do not force myself to do this. I want to kiss you, just because you are you and I am I.<<

Really good, I mean!
Very well done!

oh man, das war echt schön!
und so traurig...
das immer einer leiden muss
*seufz*

Sianna

Hi!
There are not too many people that can read english like I can see. But your fic is really great!!! Maybe you could write a nother part to it? *questioninglook*
CU

Well... CUTE!!! sooo cute!!! *don't know what to write* well.. uhm please write more of this kind of story! You are great, makiko-chan *hugs*
TAITO FOR EVAAA XDDD
Bai bai
~Kagami