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The thing that hurts the most

by the empty grave.
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Letzte Änderung: 21.09.2003
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Englisch
685 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: One Piece
Genre: Drama
Luffy sits by the grave of one of his crewmembers.
Occ-ness insured. Warning: Character death and angsty Luffy.

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Kapitel 1 gone... E: 21.09.2003
U: 21.09.2003
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  • Charakter
    Chopper

    Name: Tony tony Chopper
    Age: ?
    Weapons: he can change forms and use the Rumble-ball.
    Dream: Actually I not sure!

    Chopper is a little reindeer who ate of a devilfruit making him able to change into a humanlike form.
    He is a doctor. Even though he had only been in the gang for a short time when it happend, the accident still shocked him.
  • Charakter
    Luffy

    Name: Monkey. D. Luffy
    Age: 17
    Weapon: his body; he is a rubber man
    Dream: to find the One Piece

    Luffy is a cheerful young man, who would do anything for his friends.
    After finding the One Piece, he is ready to return home with his crew, but not before making a stop on the way.
  • Charakter
    Nami

    Name: Nami
    Age: 17-18
    Weapon: a long stick
    Dream: to draw the best worldmap.

    Nami is a smart young girl. she had a hard life so far, put is happy in Luffy pirategang. she used to be a little egoistic, but an accident where she lost someone close to her, changed that.
  • Charakter
    Sanji

    Name: Sanji
    Age: 19
    Weapons: his legs, he has some mean kicks ready for you.
    Dream: To find the legendary All Blue

    Sanji is a young cook (A great one at that), a real casanova too.
    Everything in life was going pretty good for him, he had found himself some good friends...but then on that day...
  • Charakter
    Usoop

    Name: Usopp
    Age: 18 (I think)
    Weapons: A slingshot loaded with lots of weird stuff.
    Dream: to become a brave piratecaptain?

    Usopp is a great artist. he is actually pretty smart when he wants to be.
    He just recently changed his view on life after he lost someone for the first time.
  • Charakter
    Zoro

    Name: Lorenor Zoro
    Age: 19
    Weapons: His 3 trusty swords.
    Dream: to become the greatest swordsman in the world

    Zoro can seem cold and distant but he really isn't. He cares more then he lets on. He is a lone wolf.
    His swordsskills rarely lets him down, and he only ,lost a handful of times.
    But sometimes one is enough to turn your world up-side down. and for that time he'll never forgive himself; no matter how hard he tries to forget it.
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Von:  Kaito_Caro
2005-08-23T21:45:25+00:00 23.08.2005 23:45
wow! this story is great... very sad... i love sad storys.... and your style is awesome!
write more, please
nice greetings
Kaito_Caro
Von:  Maki
2005-07-10T16:46:58+00:00 10.07.2005 18:46
woah
*-*
great story...
very sad..but good to read ;>
hope to read more like that from you
Von: abgemeldet
2004-05-11T11:17:21+00:00 11.05.2004 13:17
ich schreib mal in deutsch, weil mein englisch so schlecht ist...
also, das ist ne echt geniale story
ich kann mich den anderen nur anschließen!
schreib mehr davon!
*schnief*
traurig, aber schön...

Sianna
Von:  elina
2004-02-13T21:06:42+00:00 13.02.2004 22:06
So sad...
I don't stand much for Sanji, but this story really touched my heart...
You really great expressed the feelings of those who have lost their best friend even when they didn't realize importance of his presence before...
Great! Continue your story-writing!
Ely
Von: abgemeldet
2004-01-27T12:15:53+00:00 27.01.2004 13:15
Wonderful story. People always do that. They never come to express their friendship when they're just sailing around and experiencing adventures like the OP characters. They only see it when it's already too late.
This story is just what I way looking for for a very long time. Will there be another chapter? ^_^
Von: abgemeldet
2003-11-14T17:20:33+00:00 14.11.2003 18:20
I've seen it's in english and I was in... liked it very much. first I thought he was talking about Robin... oo''
Von: abgemeldet
2003-10-28T17:16:57+00:00 28.10.2003 18:16
Wow, that's really great. I like it very much. And it's so sad! Anyway, a creative idea.
Greetings, Jay-D
Von: abgemeldet
2003-10-09T19:20:26+00:00 09.10.2003 21:20
this is the first story that got me crying...
it's really great.
you have a really good style - i like it

just go on like this!

eris
Von: abgemeldet
2003-09-21T10:42:05+00:00 21.09.2003 12:42
What a great story.
I thouth I would cry.
Write more.

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