Forgive me
Erstellt: 12.12.2003
Letzte Änderung: 26.02.2004
Letzte Änderung: 26.02.2004
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Englisch
778 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
778 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 | E: 12.12.2003 U: 26.02.2004 |
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Von: abgemeldet
01.04.2004 17:04
I like this story even though it's very short!
But it's very sweet and I like the way you describe the feelings!!! ^^
I hope you write more cute stories like this one!!
But it's very sweet and I like the way you describe the feelings!!! ^^
I hope you write more cute stories like this one!!
Von: abgemeldet
23.02.2004 02:08
Well, since the Fic is in English, I've to write the Comment in the same language, I guess.
That was.. short, but really sweet and good, no doubt. There was little mistakes at the beginning, I think, but they didn't bother.(you wrote ' why did I come tot all to you'^^°)
But the end... the only thing I didn't like that much. Well, in my opinion, it's somehow short and should be a little bit longer... since it sounded like masa just wäited for that sentence and just acted so cold.
But, I really like your way of describing the feelings of each person and your style, so keep on writing!!(it's late, so I'm a little bit... annoying...^^°)
mata ne
Peruka
That was.. short, but really sweet and good, no doubt. There was little mistakes at the beginning, I think, but they didn't bother.(you wrote ' why did I come tot all to you'^^°)
But the end... the only thing I didn't like that much. Well, in my opinion, it's somehow short and should be a little bit longer... since it sounded like masa just wäited for that sentence and just acted so cold.
But, I really like your way of describing the feelings of each person and your style, so keep on writing!!(it's late, so I'm a little bit... annoying...^^°)
mata ne
Peruka
