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Another Kitten in the House

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Letzte Änderung: 16.04.2002
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Genre: Humor

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Kapitel 1 Kapitel 1 E: 16.04.2002
U: 16.04.2002
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Von:  Lethtendris
2003-03-23T14:51:48+00:00 23.03.2003 15:51
Well, you wrote it in english ... do you like to have your comments in english too?
I don't mind :) But my written english ist horrible ..
But I'll try ^^
At first I wanted to say that your shortstory is really cute and well written. But there are also some mistakes in there.
So it's wrong to write "aN cat" it have to be "A cat" ... you one take AN when the following word starts with a vocal.
And I don't really think that Schuschu ist sittin on a "coach" in the livingroom ... why not? because "coach" does mean something like "Reisebus" *g*
Well but after all it is funny to read ^^
And I just love Schu ^^
Von: abgemeldet
2003-02-08T20:34:17+00:00 08.02.2003 21:34
ohh no...i hate it to read or wrote in english... i hate english...and i can't wrote english...i have understand the text(woow, this is an wonder)ok...i don't understand why i wrote so much in english..egal(lol this is german) what i would(would=wollte?) say was that this text is very very (lustig?) äh...good...ohh i think i must learn more english...

neco-chan
Von:  Oni
2002-04-23T17:48:15+00:00 23.04.2002 19:48
*laugh* That's great !!!!!! Schu is so cute ^^;;;;;
Von:  Miuu
2002-04-18T17:47:09+00:00 18.04.2002 19:47
Do I have do answer in English o.O'''
Äääh, it's short ... very short, it's .. strange XD But it's ... cute ... a way ... ^^'

Schu as a little cat would be really cute XD

Miuu ^-^