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hallo-diho! *knuffel*
ich schreib mal lieber auf deutsch.. (auch wenn ich in der letzten englisch-arbeit ne 1- in sprache hatte XD)
na, da hast du ja mal wieder ein feines geschichtchen geschrieben (fehlt nur noch, dass du das demnächst auch alles in gedicht-form schreibst XD)
jaaa! ich bin sogar zweimal (wenn auch nicht direkt XD) vorgekommen.. danke, ich fühl mich geehrt ^^
und auch wenn sich crawdy und arkilein früher mal sehr lieb gehabt haben (ja, ich habs mit eigenen augen gesehen XDDD) sind judy und ark doch auch ein süßes paar ^^
tja.. magnum musste leider dran glauben (das erinnert mich immer wieder daran, dass du mich mitten in meiner beta-lesung gefragt hast, ob er denn noch lebt XDDD)
vielleicht machst du ja mal wieder was RPG-inspiriertes (eine peron-FF XD) oder auch noch was in englisch (so lang du nicht mit französisch anfängst nehm ich gern alles XD)
freu mich schon auf deinen nächsten kreativen beitrag (ob nun FF oder gedicht)
also, schön weiterschreiben & HDL
Roro

Hello, darling!!! (...I know, I'm foolish XDD)

Well...I would never have written such a long text in english (I'd be surprised, if there's no grammar-mistake in this one...^^°), I'm very proud of you!
I guess, this comment will get shorter than usually, because there are some vokabularys missing in my memory XDD
But I'll do my very best! XDD

Favorite sentences:


"He's an actor. Used to be really big in the eighties. You must have seen one of his shows!"
...we all know, who's talken about! XDD

"She doesn't notice the look he gives her and when she looks at him he's already back to professional."
...everyone knows what will happen! cuuuuuuuuute!!!!!!!!!>.< THX for this story!!!! (and thanks to my idea to make Ark falling in love to Judy in our Gravitation-RPG XDD)

"Husband and wife aren't the only ones who feel uncomfortable in this situation..."
Of course, poor Ark!!! He has to watch while Judy kisses Crawd!!!!

"Getting of the plane about an hour later they step right into the warm Hawaiian breeze and the blue sky makes them forget their worries in an instant."
...how poetric! Now I want to get there too! >.<

"So be nice to Mr Magnum and I'll see you in two days."
I knew it! XDD but in real his name is TOM SELLEK! XDD and he's still sexy!

"Where are you going? I thought you were coming with us."
...of course not! she has to leave her alone with her sexy, cute, lovely bodyguard! XDD

"Then she waves at a taxi and Ark opens the door of the limousine to let Judy in."
yes! he's not yust a bodyguard, he's a gentleman! XDD

"Both of them watch the beautiful view that they pass by on the drive to Mr Magnum's residence."
It's not HIS residence, it's the residence of Robin Masters, Magnum lives in a little house on the area, because they are sought of friends...I guess XDD

"They drive up a long gravelled driveway that leads them to a building that looks more like a castle than a house."
that's true, it's really like a castle and very british inside (think of Higgins and you know why XDD)

""Yes? How can I help you?", he asks in a British accent."
...I told you so! XDD

"From the inside they can hear loud voices. The old man gives an apologetic wave towards the noise before he goes on."
...I know, who's making noise in there! XDD

"You can sit down over there in the living room while I take your bags to your room"
...I'm not shure, but I guess, he has personal...but there was never shown some in the series...^^°

"On the way to the living room Judy catches a glimpse of a huge black man with an unusual haircut and huge amounts of gold around his neck who is standing a little further down the hall."
... ... Mr. T!!!!!!!!!!!!!XDDDDDDDD
oh, sorry, I mean: B.A.!!!!XDDDDDDD

"I'm beginning to wonder what kind of movie they want to make here...", she whispers in Ark's direction who is already checking the surroundings for potential dangers."
I guess, they will never beginn to work, but Ark has the first job: Protecting his beloved Mrs. Winchester from crouwds of strange, male actors who were popular in the past! XDD

"The second turns out to be something more like fifteen minutes but then they are joined by a man in white shorts and an open shirt that exposes his hairy chest."
MAGNUUUUUUUUUUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>.<#

"Magnum laughs but Ark doesn't move a muscle and keeps watching him through his sunglasses"
...miracle? Magnum is a ladykiller! XDD

"Rage told her that he must be about 50 by now but he's in really good shape for his age."
I told you!!!! XDD

"To be quite honest with you I hadn't really heard of you before I received your offer but now that I met you I'm sure I'll become one of your biggest fans"
If you have taste, of course! XDD he's great!!! XDDDD

"Brilliant. I've got some nice drops in my private wine cellar."
Higgins will kill him, if he takes away one of his old bottles XDD

"he mutters and walks of with hanging shoulders. As soon as another man shows up he's nothing more than thin air to her."
poor Ark!!!!>.<

"He has a pretty nice collection of different wines though it seems like he's not a real connoisseur. Maybe he just keeps it to impress women..."
If it was HIS wine, it would be so! XDD

"And you really haven't seen any of my shows?"
Because Magnum is a private investigator! and Tom Sellek is the actor who played his role XDD

"His moustache that she found so attractive when she first saw him now makes him look like a greasy pervert and she wants to tear it of him just as all the hair that is covering his chest like disgusting, rotten moss."
I don't need a reasen so count this to my favorites XDD

"Thomas, there's something going seriously wrong in your kitchen right now. Maybe you should take a look while it is still standing..."
Is that Rick or T.C.? well, we know, what's happening: Murdock is making trouble, while making a cake, that's going to fill the whole house XDD

"She's doesn't scream"
ha! one mistake! XDD

"So he thinks she too old..."
second mistake! XDD I know, I'm going on your nerves^^°

"This must be some kind of madhouse..."
yes! XDD put magnum, TC, Rick and Higgins into one single room and it's always like a booby-hatch XDDD

"What has this bastard done to you? I'll kill him!!"
isn't it naturally, that he's scared, if she's so hysteric?o.O

"She thinks for a moment before she answers and keeps on looking at the sky that the setting sun has painted in different shades of orange and red."
...I want to go to hawaii! now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T

"You two should talk about it. Who knows...maybe it will all work out...", he says though deep inside he hopes for the opposite to happen."
how cute he is!!!!! >.<

"That's not going to happen. You're the most beautiful woman in the world! Not all men are too blind to see that."
YES!!! ARK!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!!! *cheering*

"I'm sorry, Mrs Winchester... I didn't have the right to say anything like that..."
cute! T.T

"There probably isn't a deeper shade of red that his face could take on but lucky for him the limousine arrives just at this moment and he is spared the embarrassment to answer."
...no reason. just cute! T.T

"Hey, can't she speak for herself? Your services aren't needed here, Mr Babysitter.", Magnum barks at him and that is probably the last thing he'll be saying for a while because Ark then punches him right in the face and knocks him out. "
1. he's really a babysitter, think of Michael! XDD
2. How could you do that to Magnum???!!! T.T

"You'll tell him yourself or I'll rip your head of, Crawd!"
Womenpower!!! XDD

"He closes his eyes and a warm feeling is spreading inside him."
oh, how cute!!!!!!!!!XDDDDDDDDD

"So he takes her wandering hand, holds it for a moment and then gently puts it back to her side. She'll never know..."
...how sad!!!!!!! why!!!!!!??????? T.T


so, I'm very amused (like queen elisabeth would say) and I hope, that was not the last story about judy and ark (we'll continue in the RPG).
the mistakes that I mentioned where shurely not noticed by anyone accept me, I know^^
I didn't know that you're studying language-translating, but that's not surprising, by reading your texts XDD
I agree, that it's very strange to write in a language that's not your mothertongue, that'S the problem that I have in my english-lessons during the A-level
Yes, Robin Masters is the owner of the House, NOT magnum!
And of course, it would be great if that wasn't your last Gravitation-Fanfiction
Kauderwelsch-englisch would have been funny, but this was so great, I guess noone will ever write as good storys as you!^^
thanks for mentioning me, that's an honor!
And if you wonder, why I wrote thin comment in english:
I wanted to make you happy...well, I guess, I better explain it in german, when we meet next time^^°
Hurry, to finish your next chapter of "How to Enter the Grand Line in a Nutshell"
I'll hurry to make illustrations for the douji...^^°
and I don't know if "dick-controlled" is a correct word, but it's a beatifull word, isn't it? XDD