A new chance

This is a BOY x BOY story about Takano and Onodera. Onodera hurts Takano a lot, will he get a second chance? I really tried to let it sound like a chapter of Sekaiichi Hatsukoi. Since I'm normally writing in german (by the way, there will be a german translation of the story soon)please tell me if you spot any wrong sentences :) And I'd be really pleased to hear your opinion, so please give me a feedback ;)
Idon't owe Sekaiichi Hatsukoi